Story is refreshing. Author is doing a good job with the world building by sharing visual marks when describing the locations. only thing that can be better - summertime as a reader I am losing track of person sitting and it is announced inversion. author could little bit elaborate on the effect of the spring MC inversed after using it.
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LIKEThanks for the review! I realized that I probably should've given more details regarding his inverted springs, and have taken the advice to heart! In the future, I'll have a notification explaining each effect of the inversed spring (as long as it's not MEANT to be kept a mystery đ ). Regardless, I'm glad you're enjoying it!