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Alshiera_Imara_18
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2021-09-05 18:33

I will be writing a review here today as well! Short story below! Vlad Dracula was also known as Vlad Tepes, Tepes meaning "Impaler" cause, well, that is what he did. The Turks were very frightened of him, calling him "Kazıklı Voyvoda" ("The Impaler Prince"), and mounted his head on the walls of Istanbul, to assure people that he was really dead. Consider the fact this man saw the Turks invading his land, turned to the Turkish prisoners and said 'Well, they aren't doing anything', and created a forest of roughly 30,000 impaled Turkish soldiers. In addition, the name 'Dracula' is derived from dracul, the old Romanian word for dragon. Vlad's father was a knight of the Order of the Dragon, and so Vlad's name means 'son of the dragon'. That's so awesome that if it wasn't true, someone would've had to make it up. Dracul can also mean devil, which also makes it appropriate for anyone who could scare away the Turkish army — and for the demonic imagery Bram Stoker used in his novel several centuries later. His greatest accomplishment, for which the people of modern-day Romania still revere him, was to keep his small, not particularly wealthy or powerful country independent while it was pretty much the front line of a generational war between two powerful civilizations (largely Christian Europe and the largely Muslim Ottoman Empire). Few rulers could have managed that, no matter how clever or how insanely brutal. His ex-Janissary compatriot and co-rebel Scanderbeg got the name that means Lord Alexander, third greatest fighter of the Balkans after Alexander the Great and Pyrrhus, by the Turks. Another associate of Vlad Dracula was János Hunyadi, a Hungarian military figure known as "The White Knight of Wallachia". Even his son was given the name "Corvinus", making his complete name "Matthias the Raven". In Hungary, Hunyadi is known to this day as "Törökverő" (Defeater of Turks), a moniker he gained after turning the tides of the seemingly hopeless Siege of Belgrade and defeated the much more numerous Ottoman army. His son, the aforementioned Matthias Corvinus, who ruled Hungary for several decades, got dubbed "Igazságos Mátyás király" (Righteous King Matthias) after his death, and became reimagined as a folk hero who walks among his people in disguise to put uppity noblemen in their place. In his life, he was actually rather disliked for his harsh taxation of his people to support his numerous military campaigns.

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Venerable_Soveris
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If you were actually a person that had good writing sensibilities I would ask you to write a novel on this. But due to your review I would have to ask you to give the concept to someone else to write.

Alshiera_Imara_18
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Go forth, and do as you will

Venerable_Soveris:If you were actually a person that had good writing sensibilities I would ask you to write a novel on this. But due to your review I would have to ask you to give the concept to someone else to write.
Fierce_dark_Rider
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Well Vlad Dracula is one of the main character playing roles in the novel "My three wives are vampires" ! I particularly like this novel very much and it has more than 750 chapters and am waiting for more to come!

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Venerable_Soveris
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So, like much to be found on this site, the novel is subpar in every standard beside updating stability. I would not recommend reading this novel. It is not offensive, but a very disappointing execution of a very good concept. There are many more novels that are better than this. The overall the concept was very good. A viscous young lady of the imperial family goes after the reincarnated female MC. But the execution of the concept leaves much to be wanted. 3/5 Writing Quality: The writing quality was barely acceptable. It was easy to read with no horrendous grammatical or spelling errors. From a technical standpoint it was average at best. It looked like a grade 8 or 9 wrote it. 4/5 Updating Stability: I wasn’t able to watch the author updates it as they were reading it. In other words I have just read it this hour. Looking at the chapter list it looks like they update it every day, taking weekends for a break. Though this past month or two the updating wasn’t stable. I’m assuming it was because of the holidays so that’s why it is 4/5 instead of 3/5. 2/5 Story Development: The development of the story was very fast paced. The prologue was only 2 chapters. Which may not be a bad thing, but it could have taken 5-10 chapters and had been decently paced. Within the first 2 chapters the first climax was reached. What should’ve taken an entire arc took 2 chapters. That is a very disappointing occurrence. 2/5 Character Design: The design of each character is described in no more than 3 sentences total. For the MC, if the prologue was expanded to about 5-10 chapters instead of 2, we could have had a much more in-depth understanding of the MC before the reincarnation. The “vicious young miss” was only described in those words, we did not have anything to show us how viscous she was. We didn’t have any details about any characters appearance besides “beautiful”. Extremely disappointing to know nothing about any character, let alone the 2 main characters. 2/5 World Background: Again, if the prologue was expanded to 5-10 chapters, we could have had a much better understanding of the novel before anything was changed due to the MC. We were not given a single description about the setting (world, continents, empires, etc...) in any form. This could’ve been explained to us in the first few chapters of the reincarnation. Giving us an overview of the empire they were in, then a slightly more descriptive explanation of the city the MC lives on would have been a exponentially better introduction than the MC “waking up” and greeting the mother who we know nothing about. 1/10 Overall Review: This work leads much to be wanted. The concept, like most, could’ve been very interesting and enticing if the author had any form of competence above a year 9 writing in the middle of mathematics class because of boredom.

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