Review Detail of Jo_J in The Hidden Sage and The Star Chariot

I am not really in the fantasy genre, but after reading a few chapters I have an idea where are from ;) what kind of books and movies you like ;) The cover page is great! The synopsis is short, but gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The most important fact is that from the very beginning of your story you are trying to describe the world you created. Well done!