Review Detail of Edel_Li in Mated To The Enemy: Loving The Wolf

Okay, dear! This was an interesting beginning. The fact that you are setting the bg first is useful, so the reader knows a few points already. Vampire x Werewolf's stories are not easy as they are used by many, so I give you a point for your ideas. Readers, if you are into Vampire x Werewolf's, give it a try! Note for author: Please, take out the "POV" lines. Those are totally unnecessary. It's terribly redundant.