Love the gothic old-style melodramatic cover on this book, is the first thought that came to me, haha... In a vampire-werewolf romance story, very appropriate. Maybe a little less dark on the title font? A bit more silver-ish perhaps. The grammar is excellent, and that's not a small thing. The main character's voice is interesting, but as romance leads I like MC personalities to be immediately distinct. Though there's only four chapters, and most of it is still situational data, so I expect something more interesting to crop up in the near future. Star-crossed lovers, political intrigue, enemies to lovers, and supernatural powers - all ingredients of an interesting story! Good start! Keep on writing, author!
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