Best of luck. I hope you will make him a little humble no matter how much he loves money. Don't make him socially awkward. 👍✌️✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️✌️👍✌️✌️👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍

The story so far is intriguing. I like the mc and his quirk although his past life is depressing and was too much of a focus in the beginning but i understood the necessity of background information. I hope the romance is good in the future. Enjoyable read.🤘

I really like we’re this is going and the way you write and i got suggestions like for hes senses he can go for 5 elementes: 1-earth (medium range depends on how strong is the vibrations)-sismicsense he can sense the vibrations in the earth wen something or someone moves or wen he stomps to create yhe vibrations or even checking or mapped a place but not to big 2-wind(long range best reading depends in how erratic the wind is)-i think tha this is the most reliable element for long distance ether it can be like a sonar or throu feeling the change in the wind And for close combat i think that until he cant use it cust he does not have the control and experience to read the erratic wind in a close combat 3-water(close/medium range the medium depends in finding people with other elements)-here you can go for sensing the water in the body of people and wen the in close combat you can use it for predicting attacks but it needs the help of ether earth or wind to sense the people that are far so he can lock in to the water in the body 4-fire(close/medium/long range depending on how high the temperature is)-i think this is the last element wen it comes to sensing and tha will be by sensing heat signatures 5-lightning(close/medium/long range)-for me this is the best element for sensing every thing around you can go for long range like enel from one piece and i now he had observation haki but the lightning fruit help extend that a lot but im going to nerf the lightning element a little he cant used it long or medium range wen he is around electronics so nower near a city you now he can make the power to go out And it can make him overwhelm with all those electric signals going around him but for close combat it’s going to be OP he can predict ther moves and can make the lightning armor from naruto so hee ca move fast and react fast and trough the lightning he can strengthen his body

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Well if your looking for anything original this ain't for you it's your typical Insert Edgy backstory and then more edgy backstory after Transmigration and instead of Story being Original it just follows Same old trash plot on being a hero you know the usual nothing really interesting even he's quirk is boring. It's well written so I'll give it that bug apart from that this is a read once and forget about it type of story.

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please update more chapter and please don't drop it.... every MHA fanfic end up dropped and it's frustrated that I can't read more 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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