I really like the premise, I want to read it, it interests me a lot, but ... grammar is infumable, it is bad, it gives cancer, it cannot be read without consciously killing neurons, it is like mtl, but a little better, although it is not worth mentioning it is improvement, sincerely I would like to believe that it is a novel copied and pasted from the author and then start to edit it, but I can only qualify it with one, since I am unable to get past the middle of the first chapter, with how rubbish the grammar is.

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high pleased I wait continuation of translation although there are errors in translation but to me and so well [img = fp][img = update][img = рекомендовать]

I’ll be honest! I don’t know if is a original work or a translation but the story is good if you leave behind all the mistakes in the translation or writing?? I have been reading a lot of MTL stories so I don’t Have problems reading stories like this one! Give it a try 💪🏻😎

First is the obvious issue of grammar and pronoun usage. Often times you do not know if the character is male or female because the pronouns used are switched for the same character over and over again. For the most part I have been able to ignore that issue as there is a lot of content and for the most part I find the premise to be enjoyable. The story itself has one of the worst 'goldfingers' that I have come across. Basically the MC is just a machine used to transfer various works from one universe to his current one. He gets little to no benefit for doing so except to make money and fame. He gets points to unlock other mangas from Universe A so that he can make an exact copy of it in his current Universe. The only changes that he seems to be making is cut out filler chapters or to try to make the art a bit more up-to-date. I have read similar works such as 'I am a superstar' or others like it where the MC is plagiarizing from one universe into his current one but at least there is usually some concrete benefit built into the 'goldfinger' such as skills or attribute gains. If anything at least the MC should be given the increased creativity to make changes and update and personalize the work for his universe and situation. Just maybe give him a sight bonus so that he can see the prospective popularity or objective quality/rating of the piece once it is created. Don't just act as a copier for your system.

Basura total, es MTL y en cuanto a la historia es lo de siempre, un chino reencarno con todos los mangas japoneses roba todos los mangas y gana el premio dragon superior god, luego vienen las peleas en la editorial porque hay que darle cara al chino supervisor y sale otro chino a pelear etc luego salen con cosas racistas, gana el super premio dragon volador basura

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This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.

Stopped but not dropped at chapter 1 Due to too many mistakes 1. Shifting perspectives first, 2nd, 3rd and 1st of another character 2. Constantly putting in random words that make not sense in context for example responsibility 3. Not clear who is talking