Review Detail of MizA in You made me cry

It took me by surprise. It's so poetic and filled with nostalgia. I really liked how the characters were presented, and how it ended. Kudos for the author, it deserves to be in the right shelf here in WN to be truly appreciated. There's nothing that can't be easily fixed, in terms of grammar (I'm not so good at it myself, so...) I really look forward for what next the author will bring to us.