Review Detail of Mavier in You made me cry

Item: You made me cry
Rating: 5

Review detail

MavierLv12yrMavier

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min_jasmine

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min_jasmineAuthormin_jasmine

Actually, I am not good at English so all I can do is use google traduction Thanks any way

Mavier:well, the gramar is pretty good, but there are some sentences you should consider reformulating....

2yr

min_jasmineAuthormin_jasmine

What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?

2yr

MavierLv1Mavier

well, the gramar is pretty good, but there are some sentences you should consider reformulating....

min_jasmine:What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?
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2yr

MavierLv1Mavier

I think you need more practice in that, but otherwise I liked the story

min_jasmine:What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?
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2yr

MavierLv1Mavier

I wasn't good at english too, just keep writing! and you'll notice the improvements!

min_jasmine:Actually, I am not good at English so all I can do is use google traduction Thanks any way
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2yr

MavierLv1Mavier

Seems someone has a crush on Jin :eyes:

min_jasmine:What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?
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2yr

min_jasmineAuthormin_jasmine

I am one of the biggest fans of BTS

Mavier:Seems someone has a crush on Jin :eyes:

2yr