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What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?
well, the gramar is pretty good, but there are some sentences you should consider reformulating....
min_jasmine:What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?image
I think you need more practice in that, but otherwise I liked the story
Actually, I am not good at English so all I can do is use google traduction Thanks any way
Mavier:well, the gramar is pretty good, but there are some sentences you should consider reformulating....
I wasn't good at english too, just keep writing! and you'll notice the improvements!
min_jasmine:Actually, I am not good at English so all I can do is use google traduction Thanks any way image
Seems someone has a crush on Jin :eyes:
I am one of the biggest fans of BTS
Mavier:Seems someone has a crush on Jin :eyes: