Review Detail of Chase_Xavier_123 in Scarlette Overland

Great fantasy pick. The story is about our mysterious capable SSS rank adventure mc who is famous for being independent throughout the empire. But one day she mets this guy Ryan who doesn't know how capable she is. He loves to poke his nose in other people's businesses and same way he asks mc if he could join her on mission. With mc's agreement their journey of adventure begins with mc's past following her throughout her journey with this strange guy. Writing Quality - It's good, grammarly might help you further. but overall it was great. Story development - It kind of feels slow at start but it's need for world building and to give readers the time to get absorbed in the story world. Character design - The mc is mysterious yet she has a human side. Ryan feels like a open book but there is a possibility of seeing more depth of his character. World background - It resemble the normal fantasy adventure guide type setting but of high quality. The efforts author put into world building is visible. Will I recommend this? Yeah, it has fantasy, mystery, capable female lead, funny ml. It's good read for people who loves this genre. It kind of gives the feel that it can satisfy both male female audience but I will still think of it as female leading. Keep up good work author 😊👍.