Review Detail of XXXXC in Scarlette Overland

Only a few chaps are out, and I must say that the concept is interesting. I can't say much about world-building because of the same reason. As for my complaints, it naturally is your writing quality. Author, I suggest you proofread and edit the chaps once. There were many grammatical errors. The major one being the usage of past and press together, that too many times. I am not that of a big critique; still, these things take me (and other readers too) off the story. This aside, Good luck. ;D