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2021-10-06 05:43

A good premise with plenty of room to grow. The main character hasn't yet shown his/her individual character so far (chap 67). A little slow to get started so it would be good to build up a backlog of chapters.

ISEKAI: Leveling Service

ShovelingKnight
4.0
198 Chs

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ShovelingKnight
ShovelingKnightAuthor

Thanks for the honest review... I'm glad that someone like the story despite it being not that great.

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ShovelingKnight
ShovelingKnightAuthor

[Author Review] I simply a clone of EXC... 1. MTL so it was bad. 2. Update? 3 times per week or daily... depends 3. Even the author doesn't have any idea. 4. Only the important character would have their art shown. 5. It's a game

3yr

XeyM
XeyMLv1

Alright story, basically I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. Not something that I would recommend other to read it... This was my honest opinion so do not be mad at me.

3yr
yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelLv4

Status: Chapter 67 Is it good? -Yup it is. And all those who wanted a fast-paced story would miss the fun I get. Is there a romance? -Love Elina and Yei. Just read it, okay? The story was kind of generic in the beginning, and it's not a bad thing for me as I was looking for familiar things rather than messed-up world background with loopholes. I already wrote a review but it was when I was at 30+? Forgot it. But even there, the story was progressing. The writing was good, even though the author was claiming it is bad since it was an MTL, don't believe him, it is not bad. His writing is even better than those who are at the ranking, to be honest. But not in exaggerating since I haven't read all novels on this platform, I just noticed that overrated trash novels can't be compared to this one. Now... I just expressed my emotion, let's jump into the downsides of the book. Plot Armor. -Well, his system is the freaking heck plot armor since the beginning. Dense MC. - Sometimes he/she gets clueless about things when in the first place, the world was just the same as the game. But I understand the MC since there are changes in the current era as it was supposed to be years have passed since his known era of the game. Nothing else. Will leave a review after another 30 chapters.

3yr
salad_plate
salad_plateLv4

Like other reviewers have said the story is extremely bland. I don’t often give reviews, especially so early in the story, but this one really just feels like reading cardboard. The MTL quality is... ok, but not that good. Overall the story was not interesting enough to get me to overlook the quality. 2/10

3yr
Alancaster
AlancasterLv12

Well I already love novels of this genre and didn't regret starting it. Since not many chapters are yet published it would be too soon to make a judgement, but it seems well going so far.

3yr
Suoshi
SuoshiLv2

Really liked the story. No visible grammar mistakes to address and the pacing is pretty good. Of course I really enjoyed reading the chapters! The 'Email' writing thing was pretty interesting. Overall, a good experience. (p.s. the cover art is amazing too! :))

3yr
Sunny_Qzado
Sunny_QzadoLv12

It has a good story and good character development. Also has strong world background. There are some spelling and grammatical errors but the story is still understandable.

3yr
Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv13

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

3yr
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