Review Detail of zebas8297 in Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Dude I blame you for ruining 90% of the naruto fanfics now I will have to demand quality, I am literally deleting part of my library xd, seriously speaking it is the best naruto fanfic and you are competing for one of the best fanfics in general in the entire world site, I like how detailed you are with the training and the plot in general it shows that you investigate and you surprised me more than once with the plans and tricks of the kages, I only have doubts regarding the organization outside of konoha when it was Most of them do it, it tends to break the fanfic a lot or make sense of it, I don't think it happens but it scares me, I also like the logic of the character without being a boring emotionless character, although I would ask for a little more interactions, I'm not saying a total romance (although It would be interesting to read about a date with the ramen girl or some noblewoman, I can't think of any coherent ninja of her age) but some true friendship would be great, otherwise we are approaching the canon and I don't know how feasible it is It's for the main character to be a jounin sensei, it would also be great or at least have an apprentice.