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FrostedPerry
FrostedPerryLv132yrFrostedPerry

Absolutely loving this novel it's quickly becoming one of my favorites. Your writing is great and even though some people might not like the "slow" pace I'm loving it. I agree with another reviewer that there being few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC is a good thing for now considering it's the academy arc and the MC has no reason to care about other non-canon students (except possibly his future teammates). However I am interested in seeing dialog in the future between the MC and his future teammates. It may open up new ways to expand on the MC as he is almost too perfect personality wise. I'm wondering if he'll have any flaws? Will he always get along with everyone? Does he work well in a team? Can he get others to listen or will he listen to others? For now it makes sense because he's basically an adult and has no reason to pick fights with children about strength but will he ever lose his cool? Whether he stays this Kakashi-esk personality with the work ethic of Guy or we see a new side I look forward to it either way. Thank you for the chapters!

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Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Devil_Hex

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Devil_Hex
Devil_HexAuthorDevil_Hex

Thanks. And yup, I'm working on the dialogues. There'll definitely be more in future (and hopefully I'll get better at writing them).

Krizzle08
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is there any romance?

Devil_Hex:Thanks. And yup, I'm working on the dialogues. There'll definitely be more in future (and hopefully I'll get better at writing them).