It's good. Proper grammar, no plot holes, pretty much everything you'd want in a good fic. Keep on reading. .................................................................................................................................................
Devil_Hex
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LIKEWill the protagonist have a partner in the future? And if so, you can have the girl chosen by the public based on the number of votes for that character or choose one based on your tastes.
Devil_Hex:Thank you for the review.
Alexx_Sejas:Will the protagonist have a partner in the future? And if so, you can have the girl chosen by the public based on the number of votes for that character or choose one based on your tastes.