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Review Detail of DollShururu in Stealing Spree

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DollShururu
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It sucks that the author tend to overexplain everything. There's too much of "Tell don't show" in this story. No sense of mystery at all and the novel doesn't evoke my curiosity because author keeps explaining the personality and relationship of characters in the narration rather than showing it through actions.

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Stealing Spree

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