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2021-04-27 07:35

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 27/04/2021 @chap289 (released chap till date: 295) review divided in: Short review Long review with ratings IMO Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) SHORT REVIEW: Pure gold! One of the best modern harem out there! And also my review is based on the previous novel, though i dont think anything really changed. LONG REVIEW: writing: 8.5/10 Few grammatical errors were there. Many might also not like the first person perspective (though this novel really did great, and i dont think third person perspective will suit this novel) update: 10/10 This is newly updated, and the author promised 7/week. For me 7 per week is good for original novels. plot: 8.5/10 Sometimes plots are repetitive, but then again this is day to day life of a seemingly 'normal' high school student. So yeah repetitions are allowed! Harem? One of the best harem story i read. Yeah sometimes it feels too rushed (especially few girls in the later chap which i din like) but yeah you can't deny the satisfaction you feel sometimes when mc and the girl get together after 100s of chapters. World building... There really is nothing.. the world, till now just revolves around few places. characters: 9/10 With such a big harem, i will just say author did great job in giving most of them 'real personalities'. Most of them have their own thoughts and ambitions. Even the male side charas has different personality, i really loved this thing about the novel. pacing: 8.5/10 Slow! Let me repeat once again... This is a story of a highschool boy's daily life. Yeah so authors takes the chance to explain the whole day. Sometimesnit even takes 30 or so chapters for a day, but i personally dont mind it. dialogues: 8/10 At the beginning it was a little pale. Every character seemed to talk in similar manner but later chapters author really improved, and one can notice the changes. entertainment: 10/10 This is a novel you can't get bored... This is a biased scoring Overall: 4.5/5 IMO: Maybe, sometimes getting a different character's view point will just be awesome (as long as it doesn't affect the plot.) CONCLUSION: An amazing harem novel! 30 chapters are enough to hook you! I am not talking about harem haters, but even if you are just ok with harem then do give this novel a try! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - Sometimes little bit on the darker side. - No females who have joined the mc have any visible problems with him (tho they tend to get jealous many times.)

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I needed three approaches till i finally managed to enjoy the story, but then i really did. So let me explain why: (I've read 206 chapters at the point of this review) First of all, i'm quite sensible with sad stuff. I don't like it if girls suffer and i just want everyone end up happily together as "family". And when i started to read i hated the mc. I felt terrible for the girls and really disliked everything about the mc. I've talked about the novel with a "friend" of mine, after the author recommended it in my forum thread and he started and continued reading it as well. Later he approached me again and urged me to give the novel another try to at least read till chapter ~25, or maybe even ~80, because in those parts there would come really huge character developments. And and tried to give the novel another chance. He was right, after the start i really enjoyed the novel more and more. The characters are interesting, the romance is partly really super fluffy and after the start and the character development i really started to accept the mc as well. I still had some "problems" with the twisted relationships some girls have/had before. And i still can't totally forgive the mc what he's done to some girls. But the romance and harem overall is so fluffy and lovable, that i really enjoyed it a lot. The romance itself turned into something with deep feelings (and not only ***) with the characters really caring for each other. And the harem setting hasn't much unnecessary drama but shows how much they love each other. It's also nice to see, that not everything only depend on the mc but that the girls will also be part of the work/solution. So if you are like me, bad with sad stuff and mostly here for the fluffy harem: Try to read past chapter 30. The story and the characters will change and it will be a fluffy and caring relationship. And many of those dark things the mc did may not be as dark as it seems and/or get a good ending.

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