Review Detail of JoJo_Soni in Bugged System
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hmm... the world setting is very very typical. suddenly monsters come into world. most people die. but by the grace of God, system appears. those with system are called hunters. then a time skip to show that it is a normal now. MC who is jobless gets the system. so now he is on his path of the main character. there is a lack of interesting side characters and interaction. author is new so he mostly explains what interaction he had in mind and skips it rather than us seeing the whole conversation. which doesn't let us know the character properly. I recommend taking cultivation online as a reference. it never skips a conversation which makes it so interesting. and MC is getting too op too soon. it's like chapter 3 or 4, but he already is like s rank. slow progression is what makes us interested in his journey unless u have a very very interesting side or main plot. and him suddenly showing his arrogant side was very shocking to me. since it was first time he showed such side of him. I see that you have concept and plot in a mind. I recommend setting some kind of goal or future plot point early so readers are excited about what's to come. and to say it in one line, if this isn't your first time reading such a novel, you will find it very very familiar and kind of boring. though there is room for improvement. take it slow with every scene, and do less of exposition. take your time with it and don't explain everything at once. do it only when it is required. let us explore world slowly as we read
Bugged System
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in the year 2026...the invasion of the monsters almost caused the whole world to become an apocalyptic one. Due to the human's decisive decision to survive...they hid. It's all stated in the first chapter. A minority of people also got granted with superhuman abilities that helped fight the monsters and take back the earth once again. The System is only for the protagonist...not for every awakeners. The origin of the System is not yet revealed and the reason Yu Jin-Ho's stats are abnormal is also not yet stated. Those things will begin to uncover themselves as the story progresses. I can't just lay all the information right at the very beginning...that would make it very boring. The reason I wrote it like this way...conversation dialouges aren't really that long as I refrain to use it for long. I stated some of the conversations in a narrative sense because it's much more efficient and I can also convey the character's personality. As for the characters in this book...it's only the early chapters man. The other major characters will later be revealed in future chapters.
the setting in particular, I have read it too many times. that's why I said it is very typical. I will make another review if my views is changed.
Kurt_Inocencio_2281:in the year 2026...the invasion of the monsters almost caused the whole world to become an apocalyptic one. Due to the human's decisive decision to survive...they hid. It's all stated in the first chapter. A minority of people also got granted with superhuman abilities that helped fight the monsters and take back the earth once again. The System is only for the protagonist...not for every awakeners. The origin of the System is not yet revealed and the reason Yu Jin-Ho's stats are abnormal is also not yet stated. Those things will begin to uncover themselves as the story progresses. I can't just lay all the information right at the very beginning...that would make it very boring. The reason I wrote it like this way...conversation dialouges aren't really that long as I refrain to use it for long. I stated some of the conversations in a narrative sense because it's much more efficient and I can also convey the character's personality. As for the characters in this book...it's only the early chapters man. The other major characters will later be revealed in future chapters.
thank you for your reply dear reader...it's just as you said. The setting of this story is similar to other novels with this genre. I purposely done it that way so that the readers can pretty much more or less relate themselves to the stories' setting. Even though the setting is typical...the pace and plot in which the story progresses is different than others...
JoJo_Soni:the setting in particular, I have read it too many times. that's why I said it is very typical. I will make another review if my views is changed.
Kurt_Inocencio_2281:thank you for your reply dear reader...it's just as you said. The setting of this story is similar to other novels with this genre. I purposely done it that way so that the readers can pretty much more or less relate themselves to the stories' setting. Even though the setting is typical...the pace and plot in which the story progresses is different than others...