Review Detail of Aethereal in Dragon Monarch: Dragon's Will Manifestation

I must say from early chapters in, the writing quality is above average than most authors I have read. The syntax is appropriate, the diction used in every paragraph, sentence variation that adds flavor of the passage, and the flow or the transition from scene to scene is exquisite. Even with minor errors were negligible and doesn't pull you out from the reading immersion. The stability of updates is stunning, we got four chapters slammed in our faces, I expect continuous or another batch splurged in front of me again. I'd say the story development is spicy. Right off the bat, I'm already seeing how our dear Blaze had some intimate time, you know, and the next thing we saw how the the state of village came to be. I'd say it's not that fast of a transition, but it already set the tone and atmosphere to be deep, enticing, and full of feels so buckle up because this is one of a bumpy ride. The character design, oh dear, you see the male lead and hands down I was just... OOH-LA-LA. Enough said, I'm turned on by just subtle descriptions, not overly done and enamored and in-your-face or grocery-type-check-list-adjective. I can't wait how the two of them develop. As you can see with the world background, even out or within the point of view of our main characters, the author described the transition of the atmosphere. The touch, the rancid of blood from what she was familiar with than the fresh blood from the village. The skies colored with red and the smoke that rose, these are just some of the cues that the author showed and not just oh-the-village-is-burnt without describing too much. The comparison from the characters to the setting is superb. Please keep it up author, make me engrossed with the smut scenes too!