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Professional_hater
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2022-06-11 09:50

I’m not good with reviews cuz idk what to say but I have to do this one Writing is good same with updates I don’t really have a problem with it as I’m still at chapter 200 and like to read at my own pace The novel is great at least to me the story is good world building is okay I haven’t payed much attention to that but I’m certain it’s great definitely a lot of mystery and lore there, plus the characters, especially the side characters I find thier chapters even more interesting than the mc himself(fav character is isla btw) And the mc…… hmm……. at first he may seem simple and fine but from my perspective he definitely isn’t mentally stable I mean try being trapped in a void for trillions of years and being reborn as a rock( that part was kinda funny to me though) And though somethings are confusing at the start they all get cleared later on as the story goes on all in all a great book and a great author. plus it kinda gives me berserk vibes too so I’ll recommend this to people who like dark fantasy

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man_of_culture3030
man_of_culture3030Author

If you like dark vibes, you are going to love Milk.

Professional_hater
Professional_haterLv4

I’ve seen it it has only one chapter or are you still writing it ?

man_of_culture3030:If you like dark vibes, you are going to love Milk.
man_of_culture3030
man_of_culture3030Author

I meant the character, yes still writing that one out, I was hoping to release at the same time but things happened.

Professional_hater:I’ve seen it it has only one chapter or are you still writing it ?
Professional_hater
Professional_haterLv4

I see the I have yet to meet them, and I’ll be ready for when you release it

man_of_culture3030:I meant the character, yes still writing that one out, I was hoping to release at the same time but things happened.
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I have somewhat mixed feelings about this novel. This novel had a great idea, and for the most part the plot was pretty good. However a few things didn't make much sense. So first off, the main character. He has lived in the void for trillions of years. It was stated his lost his sanity and regained his sanity multiple times. Putting aside the fact that humans trapped in a void for trillions of years would likely never regain their sanity, when he gets out of the void is where the problems start. When the main character eventually is reincarnated as a human, despite what was mentioned previously he still has quite a bit of emotions. He is not really a "cold calculating" as initially described, he is empathetic but kills to get to his goals. The problem with this, he has literally lived in the void for a indeterminate amount of eons, and has zero emotional defects? I'm at chapter 72, and he quite frankly has perfect sanity, with no emotional defects. Which, again, makes no sense. As for the side characters? We have antagonist #1 - 10, and useless girl who stays by the main character's side #1 and #2. He keeps a annoying energy parasite next to him for no good reason, despite it endangering him quite a bit. Also, as much as I love unforgiving worlds where the main character barely survives, this just isn't it. Literally everyone the main character meets trys to kill him at some point, it's kinda exhausting to read. I swear theres large swaths of people who will try and kill him just for the giggles. The plot in general kinda sucks. The main character wants to learn how to use mana more efficiently, so instead of taking the short way to go to the mages association to learn, he takes the long way. (He could've revealed he has a mana core to be taken there straight away, but instead he didn't and now has to walk 5000 miles across various places with next to 0% survival rate.) Why did he do this? Because it might give too much attention to him. Which I personally find laughable, considering how much attention he has gotten so far, I doubt revealing a mana core will change anything. Furthermore, the writing quality is sub-par, even for this site. Theres a lot of run-on sentences and a ridiculous amount of grammatical errors. Grammarly could've fixed the majority of mistakes. The conversations the main character has are kind of awkward, I can't really anyone actually saying this without being extremely cringy. Overall, a good idea, and it had a good plot outline, but failed the execution miserably. Writing quality, story development, and character design fall short. World background is only average.

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