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2022-01-05 05:45

I enjoyed reading the story thus far. Everything, was written exceptionally well for the most part. Although, he/she got their possessive adjectives mixed up sometimes. Besides that, I don't have that many complaints when it comes to the story. Unfortunately, I can't continue supporting this book. The author has a tendency to be demeaning to his readers. If you don't believe me. Read his responses to me and others. His behavior is that of a child. I can't support someone like this. Good luck to him/her.

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Stop looking for attention and sympathy here, I don't have that for you. Keep your toxicity away from me. That goes for you and anyone else who is reading this. I demand that you treat my readers, and I with dignity and respect, if you can't do that, please leave... like you said you would. Respect is not a two way road, it is a due regard for the feelings, wishes, rights, or traditions of others. Either you have it, or you don't. It is not a meter, you can play with. I don't want you here. Because I don't think you have self respect, let alone respect for others. You specifically, not my readers.

man_of_culture3030
man_of_culture3030Author

I forgot to add, thanks for the feedback, I'll fix the adjectives when I have time.

man_of_culture3030
man_of_culture3030Author

I want to add one more thing, your pettiness behind veiled pretentiousness is what disgusts me.

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