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DragonSlayer11
DragonSlayer11Lv143yr
2021-04-28 01:09

please correct your problem with he, his that are for male and she, her for females it is very annoying. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Ice Demon In DxD

FlabCat
4.1
27 Chs

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Immadropitall
ImmadropitallLv2

Don't delete the 1-Star reviews. Improve your writing first then complain. Terrible Grammar. No decent explanation of events. Random crossovers everywhere. Almost no males anymore in story, very boring. All in all, just a pokemon collecting MC no nothing.

3yr

FlabCat
FlabCatAuthor

I'm running out of ideas. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..

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AMINAHUMOBUROS
AMINAHUMOBUROSLv5

DONT GIVE UP EVEN THOUGH MANY ARE AGAINST YOU AND AS A NEW AUTHOR AND YOU MOTHER LANGUAGE IS NOT ENGLISH STRIVE HARD JUST TO POST MORE CHAPTERS CAUSE THE MORE CHAPTERS YOU POST THE MORE YOU IMPROVE

3yr
FlabCat
FlabCatAuthor

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DaoistwwYBDC
DaoistwwYBDCLv1

perfect more please ....................

3yr
akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

the grammar is bad, there are bad plot points however the central thing is if a story is interesting, if it's interesting nothing else matters, this story is a fun read, I recommend

3yr
SlayyyyAllll
SlayyyyAllllLv3

the whole story is very interesting, but the writing method please improve [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv11

Man I like this fanfic if mc has power of mythical zoan type: ice phoenix or dragon devil fruit power along with ice ice fruit power then it will be perfect. Where mc can unsealed the power of mythical zoan type devil fruit power at age around 13 then it will awesome for having transformations into animal

3yr
Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

really cringe story that makes no sense ever. just read the wishes and you can tell. not to mention the author packs like 6 different things into every wish, horrible writing.

1yr
Goliahide_151
Goliahide_151Lv14

Pleasenman before you star releasing any kind of book be sure that you at least know difference between genders and work harder on your grammer

3yr
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