Review Detail of Henry_uncanny in EFFORIA WORLD AT WAR

The vibe I have gotten from the story so far is that it's a slow burn. The author sacrificed meaningless early hype to build up the characters. As you get further in it gets better. I'd like a bit more info on the world though, it seems interesting. As for the characters... they're... ok, they're not bad, nor are they cardboard cutouts, but I'd like to see more until I decide how good they are. I look forward to see the story develop. Side note... Jane is best girl... fight me.