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AntiLoliLewding
AntiLoliLewdingLv43yr
2021-04-29 17:29

I'm gonna be honest here, the quality is a bit of a disappointment. The writing quality is really questionable since there's so many errors to it. The story is very quick, and it's almost too quick for some people. The character is okayish, but he feels one sided. The updating quality seems okay, but the world is very simple, almost too simple. This story needs a mot of polishing for it to be regarded higher, and I hope that you really put effort into it! It's a good story, it just needs some more care to it.

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M2skMan
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Well this is just a short read novel just for fun so I'm not doing my best XD but still, thank you for reading and a review.

3yr
AntiLoliLewding
AntiLoliLewdingLv4

it's okay g, however if you do plan to make it a longer read, it'll be mildly intriguing of you do try and add some more thoughts into it, I really hope that you do though.

M2skMan:Well this is just a short read novel just for fun so I'm not doing my best XD but still, thank you for reading and a review.
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