Review Detail of tyr12345 in The Strongest Caretaker in Pokémon World (Pokémon Fanfic)

You have to work on your writing wuality. The grammar isnt bad but it isnt good either. You can read it but its not really good with the mistakes you made. Your main character is too unfeeling. He doesnt even really mourn the death of his parents. The interaction between the characters up to this point is also too little. I mean you introduce his aunt as the person who tells him of the death of his parents. The Floette also just pops up without explanation. His powers are too much. I mean he gets aura psychic and an additional power? I dont think u will ever use all of them to their full potential. And how did his parents know, he had the potential to learn aura and psychic. U explain to little.