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OloEyktan
OloEyktanLv43yr
2021-08-04 11:45

good story but kind of cringy with a sentinent system... writing is ok the idea is good but how it is made isnt for me i feel just a shudder in my spine then i read it... i dont like a system with intelligence

The Strongest Caretaker in Pokémon World (Pokémon Fanfic)

Shadow_Diamond
4.4
67 Chs

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Akabane
AkabaneLv6

Thanks for the heads up, that's usually a deal breaker for me

3yr
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Urajimiru_Pascua
Urajimiru_PascuaLv2

I almost forgot to give a five star. By the way, good job author it's a good novel. keep it up.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

3yr

Legend_of_Poison99
Legend_of_Poison99Lv2

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YukiEmiko
YukiEmikoLv13

Definitely 5 stars, this book is awesome! Keep up the great work I love the way you made the main character. This book is going to become one of my favorite ones.

3yr
Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv4

I like the concept of this novel, but the MC is mentally too young for it to be a enjoyable read for me. Also I get that it's purely a wish fulfillment novel but basically turning your MC into an immortal god right out the gate makes for ether a very short novel or one full of plot holes later on.

3yr
tyr12345
tyr12345Lv4

You have to work on your writing wuality. The grammar isnt bad but it isnt good either. You can read it but its not really good with the mistakes you made. Your main character is too unfeeling. He doesnt even really mourn the death of his parents. The interaction between the characters up to this point is also too little. I mean you introduce his aunt as the person who tells him of the death of his parents. The Floette also just pops up without explanation. His powers are too much. I mean he gets aura psychic and an additional power? I dont think u will ever use all of them to their full potential. And how did his parents know, he had the potential to learn aura and psychic. U explain to little.

3yr
sv6
sv6Lv14

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3yr
GC_GAMING
GC_GAMINGLv14

Hi you can call me GC, the novel is good, he is not the protagonist or antagonist from the start, your gradually building him. at present it looks like the MC will grow as Master of all trades in Pokemon cause only researching profession is pending for him. Keep It Up.. But Need more frequent updates

3yr
Paracelsusthegoat
ParacelsusthegoatLv13

Great story so far. ................................................... ............... ..................................................................................... ............... ..................................

3yr
Uncrowned_Hokage
Uncrowned_HokageLv4

I like it I hope this story will keep updating unlike the other pokemon ff with a good story but poor updating stability keep up the good work HAHAHAHAHAHAH

3yr
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