REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

I like it, the plot and world background, as well as the title. Not to mention that I super love the characters name mainly Aries as I'm an Aries, a fire sign, then De Luna,?? which means of moon right? so I'm guessing Aries of moon... I don't know if that wasn't purpose, but I am soft when it comes names that has meanings in it. Anyway the novel itself is quite promising and I'm wishing you the very best dearest author.

Short review: an action-packed start, with an MC who's very convinced he's being tormented in a subtle way, and some good characterizations. Long review: The writing is good, with only a few kinks, overall making it a natural read. The story starts out strong, with action and characterizations, but then it drags a little bit while the whole setting is being explained. Perhaps I'm being harsh, but if action is being thrown at me from the start, I kinda expect there to be more stabby stabby than talky talky in the story. The characters are all well-rounded, with a good schism between the MC's expectations, based on his old world, and what is actually happening in this new world. It's very well done. Which brings me to the world, which seems deep and well-thought out. I have some questions which I would like to get answered in the future, but for now I give it all the marks I can.

Honestly wish I could rate it 4.999999999 forever. Only one problem. I have no idea what this story is about. I read 3 chapters, probably could read more, but I have no idea what direction the story is heading towards. If you clear that up within the first few chapters, it will definitely be an amazing book

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The story hooked me from the start, I definitely recommend this. starting with an action really does it. the characters and their names are interesting... good job.

Everything about this book is interesting, it puts the reader on the edge, as you will be anxious about the next scene, the female lead is really good and Ares who is being forced to save his enemy because of his feelings for her. The book is filled with thrills and suspense [img=exp] well done author your book is amazing 👌

First of all, I loved the book cover! Nice Art! Okay, for the review. It's a great mix of different themes. I really liked how you do the action scenes. Great job!

What a mix of reincarnation, cultivation, crime, fantasy...! Well done! The character, Aries De Luna, assasin, rich and powerful..., but in his 'reality' a very poor guy, who has to save the world... first of all he has to save his enemies, that even more difficult. The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive, I like the way you described the fighting scenes.

very creative idea, I like it so much. the most important thing that the language and the description were so ease and light. that making me as a reader focused on the events and action. the first chapter for example impeded me in the main event that make me hocked. I Highly recommended great novel.