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2021-06-02 14:29

Man this fic is chore. I am sorry to tell you author but can you please stop following the same canon universe. The MC's presence doesn't even affect the plot much. And I literally am disliking your MC. He had like no personality at all. He doesn't care to interact with anyone not does he try to. And most of the chapters seem info dumps about how his power works along with unnecessary scientific terms and what not. I hope that you can make this more plot and character oriented with action as there is so little character development to the MC or the overall plot otherwise it will only go stale.

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