Review Detail of Novel_Guru in These Worlds Of All Places ?

Well, rating are just average, I only liked beginning chp cause of how u introduced ice elf.. which slowly regaining his beastly dark nature.. but as chp goes on its completely ruined.. like his powers are shown around lvl 7+ and it runs around bell ( original anime mc) like a bf trying to impress his gf.. no conversational development all seem too forced and how the hell do anyone trusts a complete stranger.. and finally if u are writing for fun its okay to read but if you are writing to improve this fic seem like u transmigrate a model student into pennywise joker and ask him to do shits and giggle which should lead to personality disorder... I mean there is no flow in story as you read except for cannon events.. and lastly i wanna know y do you not abuse mc powers to get all girls as you stated in story instead go around a long and boring process of following canon events.. just fk cannon when you make mc OP.. this is my advice to follow whims when u make a story with OP mc.