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I wont waste my time writing a coherent review, in short the MC is a beta c*ckold similar to the author. ---- Reviews are being deleted too as there's no way this has 4 stars.

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Ummm im kinda confused what was wrong with the other one?? I thought it was perfectly fine and going in a good direction

I liked your story but am going have to drop the mc complains about himself way too much and it annoys my soul so much. I stoped at chapter 48

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I have a good time reading it. It have a unique writing as I am also writing a FF. By the way I have to ask this as I am curious 😅. What's the sauce or Name of the Girl in the Cover Photo. It's for research purposes 😅.

Liked the start of the story a bit, but after the system changed and the chapter with the gods I really started disliking this story. The system change I thought was lazy writing. And the chapter with the gods was actually useless, it was super vague and nothing was explained about their intentions or what the point of the system was. The lemons aren’t great, I don’t think the Mc is written well, he doesn’t do much. I don’t think this story has much going for it

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