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Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv43yrBunny_Junnie

Nice story! Though there is some issue with writing like "I am just too sleepy" instead of "I am just so sleepy", I have to appreciate it!. You have really great imagination so keep it up!

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The Tyrant's Accidental Consort

Alancaster

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Alancaster
AlancasterAuthorAlancaster

Thanks! If you can tell me in which chapter this issue was found, it would be easier for me to correct it. ^-^

3yr
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Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv4Bunny_Junnie

It's in your first chapter, dear!

Alancaster:Thanks! If you can tell me in which chapter this issue was found, it would be easier for me to correct it. ^-^
3yr
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Alancaster
AlancasterAuthorAlancaster

noted

Bunny_Junnie:It's in your first chapter, dear!
3yr
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Alancaster
AlancasterAuthorAlancaster

I checked it and that one was intentional, to show that Amber was so sleepy she couldn't use correct words. ☺️

Bunny_Junnie:It's in your first chapter, dear!
3yr
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Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv4Bunny_Junnie

Great thought! Seems like I couldn't get that!

3yr
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