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2021-08-06 17:22

This novel is so terrible, I don’t even know where I should start. Some reviews have mentioned the terrible translation. That’s definitely true. However, I don’t think the story would improve much even if Webnovel hired a real translator. Yes, the story is that bad. The pacing is all over the place. Important details are left out that makes the story confusing. It reads like the author has a lot of ideas but doesn’t understand the first thing about writing a story.

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Xhaare
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Actually I'm pretty sure a lot of the stuff was changed during translation. It won't make sense because they didntbother editing it.

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