Review Detail of WorthyAdversary in Truth and Family: A God's Journey

A great novel, I have no idea why it hasn't been contracted yet, but, it's still a great novel anyways. 1. Writing quality is a lot better than most books on the platform, with there being only 4-5 writing mistakes every chapter. Also, for some reason, I don't know if it's just me, but I feel like the author uses the word "sneer" in the wrong context, and it just makes the story sound super weird at some points. Other than that, there's just a normal amount of errors per chapter that don't really take away from the story. 2. The stability of updates is kinda weird with really sporadic updates, don't know what that's about, but yeah it's pretty inconsistent. 3. The story development is pretty average right now, not a pacing that would make your heart race, but not a totally bad pacing either. It's a pretty average speed that's neither really good or bad. 4. The character design is, again, like the story development, pretty average, with characters that are pretty well thought out. I just felt that some character traits were forced into certain parts of the story, making it a little weird. 5. Now, this world background is outstanding. As of where I am right now, chapter 21, it's totally thought out in its fullest and just seems really intricate. It's really amazing, and I have no critiques on it. Overall, a good novel, and it's free. I mean, for some reason, a lot of the free novels are just a lot better than most contracted novels. Anyways, good job author!