I like the characters and where the story is headed. My only two cents is that the chapters are quite lengthy and unless something interesting was happening I struggled to keep reading.
DelzGB
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LIKEDelzGB:Past chapter five(?) I decided to reduce the chapter length, so now they're roughly 1-2k words each! Thanks for the kind review though, hope you stick around! Without spoiling much, the recent chapters are heading into the spice of this opening arc!