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CaliforniaRoll7688Lv13yrCaliforniaRoll7688

I like the characters and where the story is headed. My only two cents is that the chapters are quite lengthy and unless something interesting was happening I struggled to keep reading.

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DelzGB

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DelzGBAuthorDelzGB

Past chapter five(?) I decided to reduce the chapter length, so now they're roughly 1-2k words each! Thanks for the kind review though, hope you stick around! Without spoiling much, the recent chapters are heading into the spice of this opening arc!

3yr

CaliforniaRoll7688Lv1CaliforniaRoll7688

awesome stuff, keep up the good work!

DelzGB:Past chapter five(?) I decided to reduce the chapter length, so now they're roughly 1-2k words each! Thanks for the kind review though, hope you stick around! Without spoiling much, the recent chapters are heading into the spice of this opening arc!

3yr