Well. A very good story. I looked at the title and started reading and finished reading all 43 of them. There a few things I would like to say about this book: 1. The story suddenly jumps from third person narration to first person narration which is confusing. So, I suggest that the author check for such errors before publishing. 2. some words are missing; thereby forcing us to pause to fill up those words. Perhaps a little more review could help solve this. 3. Spelling errors could be avoided with as I said a bit more review. 4. The writer is obviously more experienced in writing on this platform so she constantly keeps reminding her readers which I feel is a bit unnecessary. Maybe it is necessary; I do not know. 5. The story did make me feel like stop writing my current books and just spend the rest of my life just reading!
DragonRiderOfHell
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LIKEDragonRiderOfHell:I am trying to edit slowly. But due to circumstances in life, I do not get much time aside from my full-time job. Aside I am a male writer... Thank you for the review