Review Detail of WinterTimeCrime in Princess Pavitra Journey To The Throne

A fantastic example of a writer using their own style and what they're proficient into their advantage. These are the types of books that're good examples of proper nominations for the WSA (especially after last year's fiasco.) Writing Quality: Excellent writing quality. The sentence structure is well-thought-out with transitions that have meaning, allowing the reader to feel invested in the story. A few unnecessary indents such as the POV transitions (as the reader we're able to determine who's talking and where) as well as some misspells but those can be fixed. Updating Stability: To early to say. However, my advice would be, if you already aren't, to stockpile chapters since you seem to be releasing +1 chapters on the day-to-day. Start making announcements saying you'll release 2 chapters next week if you get 10 powerstones as well as participating in TGIF for mass-releasing. You are working on two novels during WSA unfortunately, and with the 100k word eligibility, it's quite a stunt to pull. But looking at your current strides you seem to be doing fine. Story Development: The author has an intriguing way of describing a lot in between scenes. That could lead to me sometimes forgetting the premise of what's happening and focusing more on the writing than the story. This isn't a bad thing, just something to take into account as it'll be looked at as a "slow burner." Some readers might like this niche but if a book has the tags "Action" and "Fantasy" I prefer a bit of fast-pacing in specific scenes. Character Design: You're able to gain a sense of humanity from all the characters. Overconfident princes, Soft-spoken kings, and Prideful princesses allow the reader to form a connection with the characters. World Background: If I could give more stars I would. The imagery is magnificent. Each room or place being observed by the reader has detailed imagery to explain the surroundings but not too much to bore me from reading. In conclusion, amazing book and I'm glad to have the chance to compete against someone with your amazing talent. I've learned a lot from this book alone on what I need to work on imagery-wise to stay ahead of the competition. Good luck, Author-sama. I'll be watching <3