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Paper_plane
Paper_planeLv43yr
2021-05-03 01:30

Well here's what I think •Its cool and slow paced Totally not for you if you want blood every 3 paras •Its soothing and refreshing, more than the plot or actual story the authors writing style attracts me more •The author is pretty descriptive,and each chapter is aslo lengthy, so if you also like to indulge in details of small small things,Go ahead read it •Minimum Plot holes , like its totally relatable, not like a random person at the bottom of society gets to the top of the world in 3 steps •MOST IMPORTANT: The story is In SYNC, The character background correctly influences his decisions,The world background also affects him nicely , like he knows even with future knowledge he cant become ruler of world. •Another point which I personally like about M.C is that he also doesn't like violence, so if you aslo dont like violence then you will like and understand him pretty well. ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ My advice: Dont Binge it. Read it slowly and lavish every chapter cause trust me it's worth it. ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

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Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranAuthor

Thank you, you've brightened my day today!

Skyguard
SkyguardLv5

is there romance ?

Jin_Daoran:Thank you, you've brightened my day today!
Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranAuthor

it's Gen, sorry, so not for the MC. ^^

Skyguard:is there romance ?
KottuRoti
KottuRotiLv12

Whats gen?

Jin_Daoran:it's Gen, sorry, so not for the MC. ^^
Mature_Raven
Mature_RavenLv1

Too late I already binge it. It was so good, totally unexpected to find this gem in quidan of all places. If you guys know other novels of this quality, please tell me

phrogberry
phrogberryLv3

FFS literally an hour or two ago I recommended this to you by replying to your reply to my comment looll

Mature_Raven:Too late I already binge it. It was so good, totally unexpected to find this gem in quidan of all places. If you guys know other novels of this quality, please tell me
Sapper
SapperLv14

I check back every month to see if the break is over. Agree with the review. This is one of my favorites.

Pandahulk
PandahulkLv2

Glad to see a correct review!

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Fiaran
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Awesome story!! I don't normally give 5 stars because even in some fairly well written stories, my bloody persnickety brain notices the flaws, and throws me out of my immersion in the story. While this story isn't perfect, it's well enough written and so enjoyable that the odd small flaw doesn't break the immersion. It's a delight. The dialog is witty and that's because even the other characters, both in and out of the game, are believably vivid and interesting, let alone the MC. It uses a classic web novel trope, the respawn, without treating it like a trope. The MC is affected by his death, and past, unlike the typical, "Oh well, that happened. Let's have a good life this time!" reaction you see so often, as if years of life, conflict and death have no impact on the psyche. It also doesn't follow the standard "I will save the world" or "I must become powerful and/or rich" (in either world) plot this time around, despite the MC being weak in his first life. He was weak, but there isn't the bullying, abuse, betrayal by half-brother, fiancee, best friend, step-mother, classmates, etc.. you see in respawn stories. Too often in a VRMMORPG game novel, after a while, either the game or real life (typically real life) starts to feel either boring, just for word count, or skimping on anything interesting or meaningful. That is not happening in this story, and there are enough plot lines going on that it does not seem likely. As others have said, this is a well thought out story. Well done! I am totally looking forward to more chapters. I'm even going to read the Jim Daoran's other book, The Slime Farmer, even though I don't like slimes and typically ignore such books, because this author has given me reason to think that he can write an enjoyable story, even with slimes involved. (Don't hate on me about slimes, we all have our likes and dislikes. ;-)

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