Item: Where did it go wrong?
Rating: 1
Author: MaestChump

MaestChumpAuthor3yr

2021-04-19 12:25

My first webnovel so it probably won't be very well done, I'll still try my best to make it entertaining though, just don't expect much. Regarding a release schedule I'll try to make it 7 chapters/ week but no promises.

Where did it go wrong?

MaestChump

4.5

43 Chs

Liked by 8 people

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Thanks for your efforts, I really enjoy your work!!!! Have confidence in your skill, because you deserve it and I wish you good luck (*ฅ́˘ฅ̀*)!!!!!!

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Why vote 1 star tho.

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Have you dropped this novel?

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