Review Detail of 26stars in Marshal, Come on and Catch Me [BL]
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Hello, fellow +62 author! I come to appreciate your good work! 😁 It's so good! The descriptions are so detailed and so majestic. It feels like reading a poem in every chapter. But, in some parts, the descriptions are confusing and too detailed. Too many narratives when I'm longing for dialogues, lol. I'm not that good at English, but I found some grammatical errors in this story. The errors may confuse the reader to grasp the meaning of the descriptions. Even so, I still admit that the author is so talented with words! Every word in this book is wonderful! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Marshal, Come on and Catch Me [BL]
Coffee_Fox
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Thank you for your reviews! I'm glad that you perceive descriptions in this way. I try to make them as good as possible. I will take your comments into account, but as an author who knows what she wants to convey, sometimes it is difficult for me to catch some things. As for the dialogues... - The future will show. 😉 Thank you for paying attention to the appearance of grammatical errors. I try to catch them all, but I don't always succeed, and sometimes even though I know something is wrong, I can't correct it well. [English is not my first language.] I hope these grammatical errors are not very numerous and don't take away the enjoyment of reading. Thank you very much for your kind words and appreciation of my writing!
Coffee_Fox:Thank you for your reviews! I'm glad that you perceive descriptions in this way. I try to make them as good as possible. I will take your comments into account, but as an author who knows what she wants to convey, sometimes it is difficult for me to catch some things. As for the dialogues... - The future will show. 😉 Thank you for paying attention to the appearance of grammatical errors. I try to catch them all, but I don't always succeed, and sometimes even though I know something is wrong, I can't correct it well. [English is not my first language.] I hope these grammatical errors are not very numerous and don't take away the enjoyment of reading. Thank you very much for your kind words and appreciation of my writing!