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2021-08-01 16:35

about 45-50 chapters in i really enjoyed the first dozen chapters but quickly changed with the later half. Writing quality in my opinion is perfect I have no problems understanding what's being said at any part in the story. Story development and character design is my biggest problem. Start of the story felt like the mc character was a cold and caluaclated person with how he reacts to betraying the other human and letting the goblin scientist go. But now it's like we have a completely different character with the irrational, unprepared hero complex at the whim of his sisters command and feelings. Also just to see the author mention that he did this on purpose is like tf? The mc system is interesting and cool but isn't op which is fine for having the mc be seen as having to put in the effort to be strong but the decisions of the mc make the system hinder himself more then helps due to his new personality change. Updating stability looks good its a above average then most novels which is worthy of praise. Honestly can't really say much on the world background to early to say but there isn't a issue with not knowing where the mc is at or doing during the chapter.

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hi thank you for the review. yes chapter 40-50 is where you start seeing the MC depth. his weakness and stuff. im sorry if its dissapointing to see it. if your looking for a perfect MC i am sorry this is not the story for you. do hope you to make another review past volume 1.

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thanks for replying im not looking for a perfect mc its fine for characters to make mistakes and enjoyable to see them learn from them. just have personality traits I dislike which if fine not every novel will fit towards everyone's niches.

Avan:hi thank you for the review. yes chapter 40-50 is where you start seeing the MC depth. his weakness and stuff. im sorry if its dissapointing to see it. if your looking for a perfect MC i am sorry this is not the story for you. do hope you to make another review past volume 1.
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