Review Detail of SelfieMaineLeLiAaj in Used to Be Cannonade(Moved to a new link)

This is amazing and I can't wait for more updates. The story development was on point and I loved how I could like see through our main character Avyanna's thoughts and opinions regarding the things happening with her It is fun reading it and I love it lol Though I was kinda getting bored of Avyanna's thoughts since she is a victim and doesnt rlly know much about what is happening to her so I want like kinda Aiden's input and his background too and why he like kinda did this to her. I like the character of aiden and I wanted to know why he was like doing this and in chap 8 like I am mindblown 🤯 like my imaginination is on fire rn isg I like love this story over all and I would love if you like kinda add more things but like more make it too confusing to read for me lol I am a dumbo lmao good job and keep going dudee