I'm too lazy to be detailed but it's a good story so far. The gist of it seems to be a fantasy adventure with a touch of comedy. The one thing that stands out is the 'system. It's a great deal more credible as to the hows and whys of its existence from the get go. I like it when the OP and meta elements actually make sense.
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