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Apoqliphoth
ApoqliphothLv13yr
2021-12-18 10:23

Though the structure, grammar and general flow of the story can get awkward at times, the author has clearly put effort into fleshing out the main character and overall world background. It's usually rare, but I found myself actually finding the characterization quite realistic and natural, while the writing quality itself picks up the deeper you get into the story. The surrounding lore also has me hooked, since I'm not that familiar with Eastern Fantasies, everything feels like a breath of fresh air. Definitely adding this one to my library!

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50 Chs

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Nekotakuu
NekotakuuLv1

I really enjoyed your book alot, the plot is engaging and character are fleshed out and seem real, But wait for updates is long, that's why I only give 3 star to update stability, I want more chapters, Do your best author~

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Kinshikanata
KinshikanataLv2

Hey there, I haven't had a I'd before this review. I just want to say please do updates more often, I usually only read translated novels but this one was really interesting so I build interest, I was waiting for updates for many days and finally got one yesterday, I was about to give up on this novel xD, Thanks for updating and I wish you will update more often, Thanks again for this pleasant read keep up the good work writer, Umm can u suggest me some other good lesser known novels here, I kinda read a popular one known as MVS but it was lame full of errors and characters were 2D if you can give me some good recommendations that would be nice.

2yr
Lhdjia
LhdjiaLv4

I have only read a bit and I must say OMG. The Author really has his/her way to make us feel for the characters, especially Leo. The grammar is good and it gets better throughout the story. This story is quite easy to understand (different from what I expected lol) and that is a good thing! The world background is very well designed and the way the story unfolds is just superrr cool. Recommended read. Good job Author! [img=recommend][img=fp]

2yr
Sandipan_Dutta_7440
Sandipan_Dutta_7440Lv1

Looking very interesting and very promising story the grammars are so easy to read and its a very nice plot thank you for looking for more chapters

2yr
Alexanderctn
AlexanderctnLv12

The grammar is good and the story is enjoyable. Something not very common around here, so I'll give it a 5 star because it deserves it. Author, keep up the good work!

3yr
Ryo_Toujo
Ryo_ToujoLv10

the author does an excellent job of immediately making us grow sympathetic with Leo, the main character, and does well to show what he had gone through, and why he has the chance at redemption that he does. i imagine the grammatical errors and issues get ironed out as time goes on, but for a story with a strong, engaging start, I can certainly suggest this one!

3yr
Lancee
LanceeLv1

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

3yr
Totentanz
TotentanzLv1

The biggest advantage of this book is the overall world building, the character design and the story. However, if you watching with phone from 1st chapter, you will 100% struggle with long paragraph and lack of stop in sentence, however the quality of writing significantly improved in later chapter, other issue is mainly on constant switching POV, you might struggle if you don't get used to it.

3yr
Snails
SnailsLv13

The author clearly has thought a lot about their world. The history seems rich and exspansive, and the action definitely does not disappoint! Can’t wait for more!

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