Review Detail of ReaderLove in Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game

Since this novel is a system novel, you can bet the novel will go downhill in the middle of the novel. So far, there are multiple flaws in the novel. One of the flaws are grammar and math error which I can deal with. Another is the fluency of the chapter, it feel offbeat. Also the Mc intelligence is rather low for being a competitor to become a heavenly emperor. As chapter 17 shows the MC blindly trusting Prince Xue or whatever his name was. That chapter told me, the Mc might have some lose brain cell. As why would just seek attention immediately. The plot is hella forced so far, to the point, it doesn't make sense, thus making me doubt the Mc intelligence. Probably due to a lack of explanation for the Mc action. I wonder why the Mc got killed in his previous life. For being someone who got killed by his friend, trust this prince xue won't do anything like removing a potential threat or rival. Surprised, the Mc doesn't have trust issue when if I were betrayed, I would lose trust in people. But I guess, he didn't learn from his past life mistake. For being a person reborn with memories, he is very naively, or did 17 year of living in earth dull his intelligence. As no one blindly go and make yourself known, as if he become known. These people he meet could post on the internet about his location to remove a potential threat. Anyway, through just these almost twenty chapters, I can tell that the author clearly didn't think through for hid plot and especially the intelligence of his character.