Review Detail of MattHarris in Love Agreement With The King

Tackle the story first. I don't really read romance books, they aren't my thing. Despite that, you've managed to create a lot of clear drama and intrigue in this first chapter, so if I was into romance novels I'm pretty sure I'd keep reading just to find out what was going to happen next. The writing, for the most part, is actually pretty good. There are a fair few syntax errors, that is to say mistakes in sentence structure and grammar mistakes, but not so many that it's overwhelming and ruins the story. The flow of your writing is fairly well defined, things move into one another decently enough, though in some places it can be a little choppy. That's a problem that everyone, including me, has at times though. I think you should be proud of the work you've done here, and I'm sure your flow and overall sentence structure will improve as you continue to write and iron out your style!