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2021-04-20 16:26

The story, the setting, the characters - all feel very real. The writing quality was excellent, as far as I could tell, I can't see how it can be improved further. This is all thanks to the author's attention to the characters' minds. It was very easy to imagine the characters, and their action appeared lifelike. If this genre is your thing, go ahead! Author, keep going!

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