Review Detail of Winter_Iris in CAPTURED HEART

Item: CAPTURED HEART
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

Winter_IrisLv32yrWinter_Iris

I love the premise and the woman is really intrguing. I really can't wait to see where this will take me in the future and now. If I could give a word of advice, just a few more paragraph breaks will help the flow of the story even more. Keep up the good work, author!

CAPTURED HEART

STESSY B.

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STESSY_BLv1STESSY_B

Thanks for your review and advise. So what you mean is I should break the paragraphs a little more to make them less bulky?

2yr

Winter_IrisLv3Winter_Iris

Yes, exactly that. [img=recommend]

STESSY_B:Thanks for your review and advise. So what you mean is I should break the paragraphs a little more to make them less bulky?

2yr

STESSY_BLv1STESSY_B

okay sure thanks doing just that in the chapters ahead

Winter_Iris:Yes, exactly that. [img=recommend]

2yr