im sorry but f you the story is to fast with hornet with ember if they knew each other better than it would be very good relationship but in my opinion it was rushed thats all
Duncan_Quan
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LIKEYay! My first critique! Cool, alright, thank you for point out how fast the relationship is, I have never been in one and the most experience I have is some romance anime, and other fanfics so it’s all screwy, also he got his powers from the void, and the voice that was talking to him there. I hope this answers your questions [img=recommend] Have a Soviet Yun-Yun