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Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv122yrEvann_Clarke

im sorry but f you the story is to fast with hornet with ember if they knew each other better than it would be very good relationship but in my opinion it was rushed thats all

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Traveling the multiverse reincarnated as Hollow knight

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Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv12Evann_Clarke

i have more to say can you plz explain how he gets hes power and dont say the system its charms not power

Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv12Evann_Clarke

like the spiders graplings

Duncan_Quan
Duncan_QuanAuthorDuncan_Quan

Yay! My first critique! Cool, alright, thank you for point out how fast the relationship is, I have never been in one and the most experience I have is some romance anime, and other fanfics so it’s all screwy, also he got his powers from the void, and the voice that was talking to him there. I hope this answers your questions [img=recommend] Have a Soviet Yun-Yun

Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv12Evann_Clarke

ok and thank you